Lili
October 4, 2009 — Lee QuinbyLili, please read the 2 posts I have written to the group: the one to Larry and class on method and the one how to propose your main focus (posted Oct. 1). Overall, I would say that your draft needs only slight revision and that, furthermore, your own evaluation of what needs to be done is on target. So, as you have said: state clearly your acknowledgment of alternative positions and also make the connection between your mail claim and supporting reasons clearer to show why your project of research is warranted.