Lili

Lili, please read the 2 posts I have written to the group: the one to Larry and class on method and the one how to propose your main focus (posted Oct. 1).  Overall, I would say that your draft needs only slight revision and that, furthermore, your own evaluation of what needs to be done is on target. So, as you have said: state clearly your acknowledgment of alternative positions and also make the connection between your mail claim and supporting reasons clearer to show why your project of research is warranted.

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