User talk:Jose.Pena

From The Peopling of New York City

Jose, this looks good. I have made a number of small adjustments in wording for clarity and grammar. Please check to make sure that I haven't changed the meaning of some of your sentences.

I just realized that this is your user page. Do you have to make a new page in order for the page NOT to say User: Jose Pena at the top?

Could you clarify the example you give in the SIR Usage section? I think you are saying that because New Dorp train is close to St. George it is easier to take the bus there than the train but in the sentence before you said it is easier to take the train if you live near the station. I'm confused. --Maria.Bellamy 16:06, 1 May 2010 (UTC)