Talk:Institutions

From The Peopling of New York City: Irish Communities

This page looks pretty good - though it's too textual. Photos, videos, and maps should be embedded in the text. All the photos/videos need to be contextualized within the text - it's not enough to just describe what the reader is looking at, you all need to highlight WHY it's relevant and worth including.

Finally, the "St. Patrick's Cathedral" section is just stuck at the bottom as a link. This has to be integrated into the actual page, perhaps in the "Catholicism and Churches" section. I'd also suggest adding an introductory paragraph above at the top that introduces the "institution" topic to the reader and explains what they will find in this section.

This paragraph can be short, but it should give a brief overview of irish institutions, and a short introduction to each of the sub-sections within this page. -- GTD

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