TIME by Philip Loew and Linda Haviv (creative work 3)
(the poem, arrangement, music, and lyrics are original)
INSTRUCTIONS: FIRST LISTEN TO THE POEM (first link) AND THEN LISTEN TO THE SONG (second link)
*Lyrics to song:
TIME CANNOT BE CONTROLLED
The clock is ticking, time is running in its pace
But as it dawns on me it turns to a fast rate
The one thing that was haunting our world and race
Time cannot be controlled in any way
Minute-by-Minute people come and go
Love was always present but now it isn’t so
Appreciation changes as beauty with the age
Time cannot be controlled in any way
This is for the children and the broken hearted
Value every second till you’ll be departed
This is for the women and the men alike
Cherish every moment, don’t just fight
9 comments
This was absolutely spectacular! The poem, the music, the lyrics, your voice. Everything came together just perfectly. It’s surprising the new things we discover about each other from what we thought would be just a class assignment.
Wow, this is amazing. First off, the poem is really poignant. Philip, when you said, “Everyday” over and over again, it really struck me how often this goes on.
And Linda, WOW. That’s all I have to say. You are an amazing singer. Your vocals are simply out of this world. And the song and lyrics are really great. It all sounds very professional. No wonder you are a professional singer! =D
This is awesome!!! I remember seeing Linda and Philip working on this in calculus, and I really didn’t think it would come out so great!
WOW! I have to start with that because this was simply WOW!! Great poem and reading done by Philip and great singing done by Linda. The poem is very powerful and Linda’s voices matches it quite well. Amazing job.
And great message as well.
Wow! Wow! Wow! Your voice is incredible! I’m speechless
Wow Linda you sound so….
I’m speechless also…
Unfortunately, there is nothing left for me to say… Thanks alot guys you took all the complements
Your voice is so incredible! I wish we’ll all get to hear a live performance soon =D