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A Beating Rhythm: will you still love me tomorrow? Critique

The performance started even before the lights dimmed, with audience members hearing the rhythmic stomps while they took their seats. Alessandro Sciarroni’s will you still love me tomorrow? begins with the dancers standing in a circle, with all of their eyes taped shut except for Sciarroni’s. The audience watches as they perform the dance sequence, influenced by Bavarian and Tyrolean folk dance, that the audience members get to know very well as the performance continues. At the beginning of the performance, one of the dancers comes forth and explains that the performance will continue until either there is no one left in the audience or there is no dancer left on stage. Thus starts the beginning of the performance. If nothing else, the dance is amazing cardio feat, with the dancers dancing and hopping around for almost the entire duration of the dance. Just watching it left me exhausted.

The use of repetition was interesting. Though it could start to feel monotonous at times, it was broken up and made less tedious by the differing formations and interactions. Most of the beginning of the dance involved the dancers dancing seemingly by themselves. Only once they take the tape off of their eyes do they start to notice one another. As the dance progresses, they start to interact more and more often, starting first with glances, then watching one another and smiling, and then playing around with one another. Long portions were broken up by small sections of different combinations, straying from the rhythm the audience soon gets accustomed to, and by the use of humor. The dancers did a great job of engaging just enough with the audience. In addition, there was a refreshing mix of professional stage presence and the faltering of such a presence. Every once in a while, and becoming more common towards the end of the dance, audience members would see dancers smiling at one another or laughing or wiping their face or playing around with one another. Dancers would, either purposefully or not, mix up the combination or do something a little bit different from the rest of the group, and eventually, the others would follow. At first it seemed very purposeful, as though the choreographer was trying to say something about being unique and doing something different than the rest of the crowd, but as the performance went on, it became more difficult to tell what was improv and what was planned. The dance seemed to take a life of its own, and whether it was improv or choreographed, it was done tastefully so that there weren’t awkward changes and shifts as things changed and progressed.

The one aspect that did break some of the flow for me was when one of the dancers would, every so often, make his way off “stage” (still visible to the audience, given the nature of the dance space) to fiddle around with the music. While the use of music enhanced the performance, his exits often seemed to come at the wrong time or didn’t fit well with the natural rhythm of the combination, breaking the beat for me. The music, too, often just seemed to be put on at random times, perhaps when the dancer/musician felt the others were getting tired and needed a motivational boost.

Perhaps the most enjoyable part, however, was when the dancers found a way to add just a dash of humor into the performance. In dancing such an obviously tiring dance while also engaging with the audience, the dancers were able to make those watching invested in the dance as well. We eagerly await what they are going to do next, waiting to see how dancers will deviate from the worn, repetitive combination. And slowly, the audience watched as dancers started to leave, starting with Sciarroni leaving early on, teasing us with some heaves of the accordion, which reminded viewers of how exhausting the performance must be. But one by one, the dancers leave until three are left. The dancer manning the music goes off stage and starts playing Say Something. Suddenly, one of the remaining dancers leaves, leaving two alone, watching him leave. Like the audience, there’s a sense of sadness, of longing to leave (and perhaps run after the other dancer) as well. Before we know it, one of the two leaves, with the song playing in the background, emphasizing the hole left by the absence of the other dancers. The rhythm that became the soul of the performance is replaced by silence, only covered by the song playing. At last, the last dancer turns and runs off, not necessarily perfectly in time with the beat of the music, but still with a sense of finality.

This performance is one that everyone can enjoy, whether one has seen a million dances before or none at all. There is no denying the strength and endurance of the dancers, highlighted by our ability to see their hands and thighs growing redder or their clothes filling with sweat. Some of the dancers would even step off stage to get a drink of water before returning to the dance. The performers engage with and entertain the audience, making it exciting to watch. It was almost impossible for the audience members to talk about the performance as everyone filed out, with the constant rhythm still beating in our minds.

(On a side note, for those who went to the Judson Church performance with the “How long can you hold an absence?” performance, I found that this performance was sort of like the opposite of it. This was about how long the dancers could maintain their dancing before they left, rather than leaving as you got tired of waiting for something that wasn’t coming.)

Alessandro Sciarroni Critique

Walking into the New York Live Arts theatre, I was immediately drawn to the sound of stomping. On the stage six blindfolded dancers stood in a circle and created a mesmerizing beat through their feet. When the lights came on they then began to form a recurring pulse through stamping, clapping, and slapping their thighs and feet. This pattern was kept up sporadically throughout the entire performance, sometimes with music playing over the sounds of this pulse. Variations in this recurring rhythm came with one dancer introducing a new sequence of moves, and then the others mimicking it. On the whole, the two or so hours long performance was comprised of variations of a basic set of stomps, claps, and slaps, with some exceptions.

One exception to the basic set of movements happened towards the beginning of the performance, when Mr. Sciarroni ended up alone on his back with his legs in the air only to have another dancer knock him down, one of several moments of humor. Following this, that dancer gave a small talk that the audience could leave at any time but could not return, and also that the performance would end when only one dancer or audience member remained. Mr. Sciarroni was the first to leave, simply walking off without fanfare. Even with some performers leaving, the others continued on. Sometimes as they moved around the stage, one would become isolated from the other, creating more comedic moments.

Throughout the performance there would be shifts of mood depending on how the dancers varied their movements and also on their interactions and expressions. At some points the dancers had stern expressions and sharp movements which adhered to the original pattern, creating a somewhat serious atmosphere. At other points, some dancers would smile and laugh as they played and joked around with one another, creating a fun atmosphere. There was a fluidity in these shifts which made the performance the more interesting to watch.

Later in the performance when other dancers decided to walk off, the remaining dancers would watch them leave but make no physical effort to stop them. This really connected back to the talk in the beginning in which the audience was told that one could leave but not return. The song “Say Something” was particularly apropos in last part of the performance when the final dancers ran off the stage. With two dancers remaining, one watched as the other left. Then on the line “I’m giving up on you,” the last dancer left, and really ended a touch of finality. After watching the entire performance, the amount of energy and effort in it all the way up to its final moments as well as the performance itself just leave an amazing impression.

Alessandro Sciarroni Review

When the dancers first began stomping, clapping, and slapping their thighs in a circle with their eyes taped over, their movements seemed random, almost clownish. However, the repetition of these movements soon began to take on a rhythm for me, where every performer remained unified and in-sync with each other. It was interesting to see this unity change throughout the performance, as they gradually began dancing while facing away from each other, and finally dancing in different directions. It was almost an organized chaos, with the dancers hopping in different directions yet performing the same exact patterns of stamping, clapping, and slapping.

The occasional additions of humor really picked up the performance since it broke away from the two hours worth of constant repetition of the traditional Bavarian dance. It was so easy to get lost and distracted in the repetitions until there was a change. For example, early in the show, the dancer in the suspenders (the one who left the earliest) had a solo, where at one point he lifted his legs straight up in the air just to have one of the other dancers knock him down, which was a startling move in comparison to the rest of the dance. There was also humor in spotting one dancer straying away or becoming isolated from the group; this was kind of an acknowledgement to the both physical and emotional exhaustion that came along with the strenuous dance.

The last part of the dance really was the highlight of the performance for me. The background music was much more attention-grabbing (like the one with the British singer), and it was interesting to see how the dancers adjusted the rhythm of their movements to fit the songs. Once “Say Something” came on, and the dancers ran off the stage while the singers sang “I’m giving up on you,” it really brought the audience back to the beginning of the performance, when one of the dancers had explained that anyone, audience members and dancers alike, was free to leave at anytime of the performance. Seeing the dancers run off the stage in exhaustion after two hours of thigh-slapping, foot-stomping, and hopping (which was an amazing feat) really emphasized how aware the performers were of this mystical, invigorating, and exhausting dance.

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Response to Gia Kourlas’ Review of “Tape” by Jerry Sebastian

In ‘Tape,’ Performers Move Fluidly and Whimsically About a Grid begins by discussing the performance’s titular motif, comparing the use of tape on the ground to crafters who put tape on a Ziploc bag and call it “a dazzling neon zebra pouch”. This unfavorable comparison gives way to complaints about distractions like the tape grid and the costume designs, punctuated with the seemingly-sarcastic interjection “Ah, whimsy!”. As Oliver states, the backbone of dance criticism is description of the performance, and Kourlas brings in details to give an overview of “Tape” and support her thesis that the performance is a non-cohesive mess. Though short, the review gets its point across adequately.

‘Zero One’ Review Review

I am analyzing the review by Siobhan Burke about the “Zero One” performance. Reading through the review, it is clear to see that the writer has had some experience in analyzing dance performances. To a certain extent a lot of the techniques that were in the reading steps were present in the review by Siobhan Burke. The technique that is evident from first sight is the eloquent language that helps burn an image into the mind of the review reader. From the description alone, one could get an overall picture of what the show itself is supposed to look like, even without having seen it.

Due to its brevity, the review also fails to go into too much analysis about the dance itself, but a decent amount of context about the man who would “safely hang himself” is provided. The review is relatively short, but it gets the point across to the reader who may be considering watching the performance without putting them to sleep with a winding response.

Glenn Collaku

Revised Thesis // Opening Paragraph

In modern art, artists frequently move away from concrete and narrative images in favor of the abstract. Mark Rothko’s piece, No. 10, and Paul Klee’s Fire in the Evening are both famous, abstract paintings. However, they differ significantly in many aspects which, as a result, illustrate the different sociocultural environments in which they were created. Rothko’s piece is purely abstract, nonobjective art, whose use of many layers of blended oil on canvas evokes emotion from the viewer through its natural brush strokes and vibrant, overlaying colors, which mask subtle underlying colors. Klee’s piece, while abstract, is not purely abstract like Rothko’s because it vaguely represents the image of a fire, as implied by the title. Furthermore, the piece, painted with oil on cardboard rather than canvas, uses much more defined brush strokes of colors, which are mostly darker than those in Rothko’s, to create a very structured and geometric pattern. While Rothko’s piece represents American society’s concern with the individual and personal emotion, a common theme among abstract expressionist painters, Klee, a German expressionist, portrays the rigid and dark world of WWII-era Germany.

-Jaimee :^)

(Sorry this is late)

Review of “Tape”

The Following is my review of the dance review by Gia Kourlas “Review: In ‘Tape,’ Performers Move Fluidly and Whimsically About a Grid” published in the New York Times. I will review the article based on the reading by Wendy Oliver.

According to Wendy Oliver, all dance reviews should consist of four main things: Description, Analysis, Interpretation, and Evaluation. All four elements provide a different level of insight or explanation of the performance viewed and gives the reader the full picture of the performance in their mind as well as the authors overall opinion of the piece. In Gia Kourlas review of “Tape” in the New York Times, only a few of these necessary elements were completely portrayed.

Within the first paragraph, the reviewer is supposed to address all general information about the performance before going into the minute details later on. Kourlas states the title of the performance as well as the choreographer, however does not mention when and where the event is taking place until paragraph three. Kourlas also fails to incorporate. She seems to include a thesis statement in the last sentence of her first paragraph stating, “… Mr. Kvarnstrom’s idea of tape extends beyond the sticky stuff in this production.” But never really mentions the physical tape that is in the production after that. So is this really a thesis at all if she doesn’t back it up? For some paragraphs she does follow the “suggested format for critique” highlighted in Oliver’s writing where she will have a sentence thesis at the beginning of the paragraph and go more in depth later on in the paragraph. But she was lacking the interpretation of the thesis as a whole, and a whole thesis in general that should have been present within her first paragraph.

Along with thesis statements, other small aspects were not present within Kourlas review. While she did describe the movements of the dancers in a paragraph or two using the suggested “strong action verbs” ad “interesting adjectives” necessary, she never once mentioned what type or genre of dance the performance was. Me, having a background in dance, was able to pick up that it was some type of modern dance but the author of a critique must write to those who may not know anything about dance at all. This is also touched upon within Oliver’s reading as well. This shows that Kourlas was lacking in the analysis portion of her review.

Overall,Kourlas does evaluate the performance that she viewed, and does give her general opinion on what she saw. However, according to Wendy Oliver’s outline of how a dance critique should be written, Kourlas is clearly missing some aspects mentioned by Oliver.

-Monica Huzinec

http://www.nytimes.com/2015/09/25/arts/dance/review-in-tape-performers-move-fluidly-and-whimsically-about-a-grid.html?ref=dance

 

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