10/6
Vacation is here
Once more we can enjoy
A break from college
10/7
I am no poet
When it comes to haikus… I-
am but a novice
10/8
Sunset is here
Requirements are filled
Lets all go eat
10/9
Haiku’s are hard
I miss uploading pictures
…. Art enough said
10/10
It’s only 8:30
Why am i so tired
Must be my bed
10/11
How does freedom taste
Imagine running to it
Thats how Gilad feels
10/12
This is unheard of
Two haikus in one sitting
Call me daredevil
10/13
Ate at my friend today
No not his house his sukkah …
Much cooler
10/14
Being a kid again
what a gift playing indoor football
and being ninjas
10/15
Sleeping what a gift
That I take advantage of
… Sleeping … What a gift
10/16
Time scatters people
Time also brings them back
What an enigma
10/17
Lots of things to do
Only two days to do it =
Not a good Combo
10/18
I wish I could read his mind
To know how it feels after five years
To see his bed and be able to sleep in it tonight
10/19
Some people want rules
Some people want to be free
Freedom’s confusing
10/20
Missing work sucks
Only because you have to
Make it up
10/21
Why can’t I
Remember my Haiku
Oh well… Lets improvise
10/22
Red Bulls in playoffs
This is one time I hope that
the bull wins the cowboy
10/23
Friend’s going back home
Lets give him an awesome last night
A “New York” goodbye
10/24
Accomplished things today
I’ve got a lot more to do
Oh well there’s always tomorrow
10/25
I don’t like writing
Most of all Feature Stories
Ugh… What a hassle
10/26
Work work go away
It is time for me to play
And thats all i will say
10/27
Funny when memory comes back to you
It could be on the way to the bathroom
weird place for dejavu
10/28
Friday come at last
Time to enjoy the weekend
Lets start enjoying
10/29
Not much to say
Running out of Ideas
Please end this Wednesday
10/30
Words are limiting
Most every thing is but we
are limitless
10/31
Should I write about
Halloween for my haiku
Or shouldn’t I?
11/1
Prepare to hear
The greatest words assembled by man
I am done
College assignments
Are a daily harassment
Leave me alone now
oh choices choices
things I want to do and things
required… that’s life
I think your haikus have a very casual feel, like they are really are just thoughts dropping from your head, both because of your word choice and the topics. They’re very simple and straightforward, and the repetition in some of them give them a songlike rhythm. They revolve around concrete themes, and not really descriptive, so most of them give me the feeling of a passing thought that I might have at the end of the day. I can kinda see how the humour from your pictures is in some of your haikus, and they both give a slice of your daily life well. For my phony Davidhaikus, I tried to follow the things I’ve written above as a guideline. c: