Heart beating loudly
There’s a round of excitement
We won the game
rain drops are pouring
everyone is adoring the sight
nature is unbound
green with orange hairs
clear crystals all in one strain
growing wild flowers
Beautiful innocence blossoming
Corrupted by a cruel world
Its gonna be a cold summer
Tear drops raining down
There’s a sad storm coming
The world is melancholy
Wearing black on black
Hitman by profession no second guessing
On the attack for the next victim
They signal change
But everything just remains the same
A government that is lost
A field of green grass
Home to several flowers
But winter now nears
Waves splash against the shore
Darkness fills the air
Creating peace and tranquility
One reoccurring theme throughout your two weeks of haikus seems to include descriptive language followed by a concluding sentence. In several of your haikus, it seems like you describe a moment or an experience, and in the last line come to some sort of conclusion regarding what you have seen. One such example is your haiku that concludes that nature is unbound. In a few of your poems you seem to follow a theme of nature, such as those regarding “growing wild flowers”. In some of your other haikus, you seem to portray a very real and genuine observation of the world. One such haiku is that in which you wrote about the truth setting you free. Just like your pictures portray a very genuine and real picture of your environment and your hometown, your poems seem to speak the truth and evoke authentic emotions. This week I wrote the poem above as I feel like it follows a similar theme to that which you have previously followed. I began the haiku by describing the atmosphere and then concluding that the aforementioned charachteristics create a peaceful environment.