Circling around us
Constant change and moving stills.
This is our world now.
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So far in distance
She is miles and miles away
but here in spirit.
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The work piling up
and the stress even higher.
No time to relax.
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Even when you’re down
The sun will still shine for you.
Just keep your head up.
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A forgetful boy,
everyday working hard for
a miserable girl
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The fall of summer,
The sum of the fall season
is life’s progression.
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A short line,
then leading up
to a point.
Looking around us,
Everything is in motion,
And never stopping.
Your haikus are very interesting to me because most of them are very open to interpretation. I am very curious what you were talking about in the first, second, and sixth haikus. I really enjoy reading haikus like these because they really make me think and wonder what they mean. The general mood of your haikus seems to vary–some have a somber mood while others are optimistic about the future. You also seem to be able to use words very well together. I particularly liked how you wrote the haiku about summer and fall. I can’t really see a comparison between your haikus and your photos. In general, I find your haikus to be very thought-provoking and mysterious, which I enjoy a lot.