The warm breeze guides me
Through my silent walk back home.
I keep my eyes closed.
A good movie can
Transport you for days on end.
The plot has thickened.
A beautiful day
I didn’t experience…
Laziness triumphed.
A simple moment
Of quiet contemplation
Reawakens me.
It is frustrating
To see people rush without
A care or a glimpse.
Emotions run wild
As I’m flying through the air
Perfecting my leap
Strong but elegant
Forms soar and fill the space with
Mystery and life.
The steady whirring
Of old machines fills the space.
I just want to sleep.
Reading tiny text
My eyes feel vulnerable.
The checkup scares me.
I cover my face
I know that I’m becoming
A human canvas
I sink in slowly
into the night’s tempting grip.
…I am still awake
Overlapping sounds
Fill the station at rush hour
I feel so confined.
The train crawls into the station
Slowly, spitefully
Our frustration means nothing.
You force a laugh
and agree with me?!
Passiveness kills.
Thoughts clouding my mind
world of possibility ahead
I’m stuck in neutral
The first thing I noticed about your haikus is that the majority of them are written in the 5-7-5 rhythm, very precise and formulaic. Most of them are also personal, focusing on you and your reactions what’s happening around you, rather than general observations. Your haikus are also very descriptive, with a lot of adjectives describing your subject. The three lines of your haikus usually state the subject, describe it or what it evokes, and your personal response. Some of your haikus are also very philosophical, which is what prompted me to write the haiku I wrote for you, since it described something deep but also had a personal connection.
One similarity I found between your haikus and daily photos is that both seem to focus on mostly specific subjects rather than general pictures of buildings or nature. Also, neither your daily photos nor your haikus follow any pattern regarding a subject and seem to just be more of a spontaneous idea you had at any time of day.