The words I never said
Always counter the established
Truth will set you free
Twin glocs aimed-
Straight at my head no
Turning back now
Death comes unexpectedly
Life flashing before my eyes
Is is worth seeing
Wearing a sombrero with
No clothes on, waving, smiling
Strange sight in Baruch
Immaculate rays shining
Warm breeze with green leaves
A mid summer nights dream
My skills transcend these
Lines that are on paper I’m
An emcee go figure
Shes scared doesn’t know
What to keep and what to put away
Looks like Brenda’s got a baby
Waves splash against the shore
Darkness fills the air
Creating peace and tranquility
One reoccurring theme throughout your two weeks of haikus seems to include descriptive language followed by a concluding sentence. In several of your haikus, it seems like you describe a moment or an experience, and in the last line come to some sort of conclusion regarding what you have seen. One such example is your haiku that concludes that nature is unbound. In a few of your poems you seem to follow a theme of nature, such as those regarding “growing wild flowers”. In some of your other haikus, you seem to portray a very real and genuine observation of the world. One such haiku is that in which you wrote about the truth setting you free. Just like your pictures portray a very genuine and real picture of your environment and your hometown, your poems seem to speak the truth and evoke authentic emotions. This week I wrote the poem above as I feel like it follows a similar theme to that which you have previously followed. I began the haiku by describing the atmosphere and then concluding that the aforementioned charachteristics create a peaceful environment.